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I used to have a Rose
One of Beauty, one of fragility
I was afraid to pick this rose
for fear of breaking its stem
or getting hurt by its small thorns
It swayed gently in the breeze
Always emitting joy and sweetness
I will forever miss this rose
For I have seen it wilt and die...

I used to watch this rose, protect it
I used to love this rose, I cherished it
I used to fear this rose, but fear FOR it
not of it
I used to cry over this rose, for it is no more
Now I have no tears left to cry
For love is like a Rose, it's beautiful but sometimes it hurts.

I saw a new rose, more wild than the last
I saw a new rose, more free than the last
I saw this new rose, and I felt...
That I had to pick this rose
Regardless of its thorns
For I have seen a rose wilt and die

This new rose had more thorns than the last
But that did not affect my feelings
This rose was harder to touch than the last
But I did not care
For I now knew that I loved this rose

It swayed with the wind
Surviving the elements
I enveyed its carefree manners
Yet loved it all the same
It stayed by me
For I never left
And I felt to pick this rose
would destroy its beauty

So I sit by the rose, always in its shadow
So I love the rose, always from the shadows
So I caress the rose, always just far enough away
To not break its delicate beauty...
For it is a love of a rose
Its Beautiful, but sometimes it hurts...
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My Shadow version of a poem based off of the line "Love is like a rose, it's beautiful but sometimes it hurts" From UnknownSpy's drawing 2: Love. I am going to make a Sonic and then a silver version.
Hope you like it, I made it up on the spot.
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Mood: Love ~scorpio0071 Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maria... That's who it is... This is a gorgeous piece! But who's the second rose?
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~NejiShadow2051 Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
whoever you want. But it's supposed to be sonic.
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Mood: Love ~scorpio0071 Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooooooooohh.. Now I see.. That explains a lot! X3
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when i was reading it i was like wait amy died! then when i kept on reading i realized it was maria i had a duh moment XD (i did not look in comments to know it was maria)
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~NejiShadow2051 Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
why did you think it was amy?
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:iconamyrose626e:
idk i wasnt thinking.....
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Mood: Joy ~NejiShadow2051 Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, it's okay-I hope you liked it.
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~Pokemonpuck Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AW
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Mood: Joy ~NejiShadow2051 Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! =D
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